Level: 3/4
Mark: 32/48
Mark: 32/48
WWW:
- Knowledgeable comments about the industry.
- Good textual analysis.
- Well analysed and in-depth, with great terminology.
- Good connotation and denotation.
- Covers most key concepts.
- Good use of political points.
- Media effects included.
- Good range of sources.
- Knowledgeable comments about the industry.
- Good textual analysis.
- Well analysed and in-depth, with great terminology.
- Good connotation and denotation.
- Covers most key concepts.
- Good use of political points.
- Media effects included.
- Good range of sources.
EBI:
- More academic/book references needed.
- Conclusion needed that fully focuses on the question and it's keywords.
- Make some sentences a bit shorter if possible.
- Link to more theories.
- Try to include genre of music.
- Less space filled with big quotes.
- Could include representation and globalization.
- Sort the layout and include works cited clearly, in correct format.
- Take notes from post-it paragraphs to improve introduction and create conclusion.
- Don't refer to myself (e.g "I", "My")
- More academic/book references needed.
- Conclusion needed that fully focuses on the question and it's keywords.
- Make some sentences a bit shorter if possible.
- Link to more theories.
- Try to include genre of music.
- Less space filled with big quotes.
- Could include representation and globalization.
- Sort the layout and include works cited clearly, in correct format.
- Take notes from post-it paragraphs to improve introduction and create conclusion.
- Don't refer to myself (e.g "I", "My")
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